Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
When it comes to the issue the importance of experience new things, some people believe that it is not necessarily to take a risk for gaining new experience. However, others have the opposite view and think that new experiences have several advantages for human. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that you can enhance their understanding by trying new things. In fact, human always gained plenty of his knowledge and progresses by experience new things. I think that some small instance can give light on this matter. If human did not prefer to have new challenges, we now are living in coves and use of stone tools for hunting. In addition, without Christopher Columbus’ cruises, we never are aware of the existence of the new continent, which is called America. So, we can not ignore this fact that our progress, development, and knowledge relates to experience new things.
A further point we must consider is that trying new things increase your quality of life. the trend of making new experience expand our limited life. I think that there is not a better example than myself when I was studying in the university in my town. At that time, I as a teenager who was so shy, I feared of to communicate with others. In addition, I had preferred to stay at home and study books instead of going out and like other my peers experience the real world. As a result, it was quite normal that I felt so loneliness and isolated that I thought the life is boring. Eventually, I now conclude that fearing of the unknown and communicate with others lead me to waste a whole my younger years. The scenario can was different that I prefer to try new things and make own perspective of the world.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that when we try new things, we gain more knowledge and progress, and also we have better spirit and enthusiasm for living. Of course, As an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that sometimes you have to take a risk for trying new things. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that its profit outweigh dangerous. Last but not least, I hope that parents pay more attention on their children and allows them to build own perspective about the real life by experience new things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are never
... Christopher Columbus' cruises, we never are aware of the existence of the new conti...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...w things increase your quality of life. the trend of making new experience expand o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'of course', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213389121339 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.1589958159 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106694560669 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0543933054393 0.046263068375 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.081589958159 0.0685040099705 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125523012552 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0251046025105 0.0351676179071 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67766695472 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0209205020921 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0732217573222 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010460251046 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125523012552 0.0139019557991 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2435.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 424.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7429245283 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325471698113 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245283018868 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160377358491 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110849056604 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67766695472 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525943396226 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 59.9323692929 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2727272727 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9175922449 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.681818182 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 43.8010291595 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.23404255319 1.45489161554 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211342453471 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.062154771165 0.103427244359 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0474657480264 0.0752933317313 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.455802279088 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102592556263 0.151897553556 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773302424713 0.114077575197 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564216601175 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365771502223 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0393658835326 0.067059652881 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154759610359 0.210909579961 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00969267698243 0.0618886996521 16% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.