Some people like to do sports alone, some like to do in a sports team, which approach you prefer?
Sport plays an essential role on people's life. However, people hold different perspectives on the preference to do sport alone or do in a sports team. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to do sports alone, and I uphold this idea for the following reasons.
To start with, I think doing sports alone allows me to control my own schedule. That is to say, I can decide when I want to do sport, when I want to take a rest. For example, I always like to do yoga by myself at home. When doing yoga, I can decide when I want to end a yoga section and when I want to take a break. Nevertheless, when my friends invite me to do sports together such as playing basketball, we need to make sure the time is suitable for all of members. Therefore, I would like to do sports on my own rather than in a team because of the flexibility.
In addition, doing sports enables me to feel more comfortable. To clarify this point, when playing in a sport team, I need to focus more on taking care of teammates or pay more attention to play with partners, but I can relax when playing on my own. For instance, when I was at university, I always liked to play volleyball on my own. One day, one of my friends invited my to play with her team. I found I was really nervous because I worried about whether I performed badly during the game and how to help our team win others. I felt under pressure and I could not do well. Consequently, I prefer not to play in a team afterwards.
Last but not the least, I believe when doing sport alone, the result will all come from me, and I can get better by myself. To further elaborate, doing sport alone, the only thing I need to do is do my best. However, in terms of group sport, I need to train other people to become strong. For example, I was good at race and I always got NO.1 in annual race competition in my elementary school. However, our class did not get No.1 in group running because some of my classmates was not able to run fast. Therefore, I realized that I really like to do sport on my own because I can do my best to win the contest.
For those aforementioned reasons, I would like to do sport alone because I can have more flexible time, I'm able to feel comfortable and I am capable of winning by myself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, to start with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18620689655 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51178645818 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5631752519 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1739130435 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04347826087 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390240715174 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138287979626 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964546571482 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253571938908 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094196577308 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.