Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Other like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches.
In today's hectic world in which life has trials and tribulations all people around the globe looking for better life. People have different point of view about lifestyle regarding the trends of modern world. In fact vast majorities of people try hard to enjoy their life. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether people like to live with new experiences or stay the same way without changing. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that every human being like to experience different kinds of matter in their life. Indeed, crowds of people prefer to adopt themselves with modern life. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that all people around the world have various attitude about trends of life. Many people are on the belief that changes in life will bring many advantages or in some case drawbacks. Scientifically speaking, myriads of people prefer to change in order to gain many chances in their life. In fact, not only can changes bring many benefits but also can provide an opportunity for people to enjoy their life. They can take risk easily and experience every things, which are likely to happen in their life. Delving further into the issue reveal that people who like to live traditionally are not confident and suffer from paucity of self-esteem, which are two of the most significant factors play a key role in people's life. Indeed, hardly ever people can progress without being self-sufficient. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country; show that people who tried different kind of experiences were more successful in order to attain a decent job rather than other who relied on constant life.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that new experiences not only will provide people great opportunities such as well-paid job and so forth but also will bring social achievement. Broadly speaking, not until people get acquaintance with vast majorities of experiences can they enhance their social interactions. In fact, not only social skills but also many chances of conversation with other people. To put it in other word, people in all around the globe need to be sociable and in this way, not only can people keep in touch with anyone but also can decline their stress imposed by life. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, consistency will lead to more success. For example, changes in lifestyle will definitely be distracted and in this situation people are not able to concentrate on their work and achieve to their goals and success in their life. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, there are variety of view in which people are likely to live with or without new experiences and changes in their life. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that experiencing different kind of events will definitely along with well-paid job opportunities. In addition, new experiences and changes will patronize people in order to improve their social position and become self-sufficient. I highly suggest that people should experience changes in their life due to having many benefits.
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Essay evaluation report by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t make those preceding benefits pale. To wrap it up, there are variety of view...
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Line 7, column 527, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their life due to having many benefits.
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234627831715 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.155339805825 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0970873786408 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0744336569579 0.046263068375 161% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0404530744337 0.0685040099705 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139158576052 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0355987055016 0.0351676179071 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82050825422 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.037216828479 0.0309702414327 120% => OK
Particles: 0.00161812297735 0.00188951952338 86% => OK
Determiners: 0.0550161812298 0.0887237588012 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0275080906149 0.0209618222197 131% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194174757282 0.0139019557991 140% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3467.0 2387.08602151 145% => OK
No of words: 568.0 408.028673835 139% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10387323944 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364436619718 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239436619718 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163732394366 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130281690141 0.112833075102 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82050825422 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464788732394 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.6087845421 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.037037037 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9205100996 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.407407407 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.037037037 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.644075263715 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 44.9806990089 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.51497005988 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296624329291 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100692194888 0.103427244359 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0650752862814 0.0752933317313 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.455073174043 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130324111724 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11028069566 0.114077575197 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607631356801 0.0781384742642 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.528741345994 0.336927656856 157% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0267282218558 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226474167654 0.210909579961 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266404691775 0.0618886996521 43% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8870967742 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 20.0 8.42114695341 237% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t make those preceding benefits pale. To wrap it up, there are variety of view...
^^^
Line 7, column 527, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their life due to having many benefits.
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234627831715 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.155339805825 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0970873786408 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0744336569579 0.046263068375 161% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0404530744337 0.0685040099705 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139158576052 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0355987055016 0.0351676179071 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82050825422 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.037216828479 0.0309702414327 120% => OK
Particles: 0.00161812297735 0.00188951952338 86% => OK
Determiners: 0.0550161812298 0.0887237588012 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0275080906149 0.0209618222197 131% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194174757282 0.0139019557991 140% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3467.0 2387.08602151 145% => OK
No of words: 568.0 408.028673835 139% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10387323944 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364436619718 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239436619718 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163732394366 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130281690141 0.112833075102 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82050825422 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464788732394 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.6087845421 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.037037037 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9205100996 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.407407407 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.037037037 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.644075263715 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 44.9806990089 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.51497005988 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296624329291 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100692194888 0.103427244359 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0650752862814 0.0752933317313 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.455073174043 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130324111724 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11028069566 0.114077575197 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607631356801 0.0781384742642 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.528741345994 0.336927656856 157% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0267282218558 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226474167654 0.210909579961 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266404691775 0.0618886996521 43% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8870967742 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 20.0 8.42114695341 237% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.