Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? why?
One of the People basic needs which never can be ignored is eating. Generally, humans require energy to do different action. People previously cooked their food at home but nowadays most of them prefer to buy their eating materials from restaurants and fast food centers. Some of them suggest that eating out side have more benefits than anyone thought. Similarly, I think outside eating can assist us in our new model of life due to many reasons.
First, one of the main issues that most of employees face with these days is the matter of time. With development of science and technology societies and work conditions altered totally. In modern work conditions workers have to do their jobs until early afternoon when they have a short period for cooking anything at home. Also, in nine to five jobs it seems so much difficult to eat your lunch at your own house since you have to work immediately after your lunch time.
Secondly, groceries and eating materials prices radically increased. It would be so expensive for a family to buy their food supply from shop centers and then cook them at home even if we ignore its long period of time. For example my friend Jim used to eat always at his home. However, he decided to eat at the fast food restaurant at their office corner recently. When I asked him about the reason of this sudden change, he told me frustratingly that the expenses sky rocketed these days and it is not economical to eat traditionally at home. Also, he mentioned that there is no need for clean up after you eat since you are eating your food in a public dinner.
Last but not least, everybody knows that people have variety of tastes and favorite foods which they can never prepare them at their own house. Restaurants and fast food stands gave people and chiefly busy workers to experience their dream foods and meals. It puts any person out of its routine boring same meal choices and offer them an enjoyable time in an atmosphere other than their living place and work office. This may even help the companies to elevate their employees’ performance in a creative way.
In conclusion, eating is one of our especial needs which should be paid enough attention. There different ways to eat your lunch and dinner. However some people try to use fast food stands, some others still believe in eating in their own house. I believe this topic should be managed by considering every individuals condition separately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...nters. Some of them suggest that eating out side have more benefits than anyone thought....
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the employees') or simply say ''most employees''.
Suggestion: most of the employees; most employees
... First, one of the main issues that most of employees face with these days is the matter of t...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...them at home even if we ignore its long period of time. For example my friend Jim used to eat ...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'eat'.
Suggestion: always eat
...time. For example my friend Jim used to eat always at his home. However, he decided to eat...
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Line 7, column 496, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a creative way" with adverb for "creative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...evate their employees' performance in a creative way. In conclusion, eating is one of ou...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...rent ways to eat your lunch and dinner. However some people try to use fast food stands...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, then, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76291079812 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43837964611 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.390342899 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2173913043 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5217391304 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385710562081 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100750234045 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850000787664 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205647711945 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788595673621 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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