People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life.do you agree or disagree with it?
All people in this world do everything in their lives in order to build a future for themselves and their families. But sometimes it seems a little bit difficult to choose what we should follow in our path through success or any other goal which was set. Some people believe that a person must decide logically. In contrast some other think that emotions play a more important role in a human’s life. I suppose that a person should be realistic in its life however feeling and romantic gestures should not be put aside due to numerous reasons that I would discuss a number of them below.
First, you should know what a better life means in a persons’ prospect. Some people think that money, wealth, higher work positions and zeroes of their bank account decide that whether they have a good life or not. However, some other people believe that they can achieve a better life if they pursue their life’s passions and wishes in spite of the fact that these may harm them since they did not have any logic. For example, my friend Jim did whatever he wanted in his life regardless of what is going to happen next. He suggested that you live just once in this world so you try your best to obtain anything you desire. He strongly opposed that a person should listen to his mind’s idea and be a little bit rational.
Second, people come to this world with different characteristics which fundamentally define their way in life. Also it causes that they have variety of ideas about how an ideal life is look like. Therefore, it is mainly hard to decide about a persons’ future from just one aspect which is being logical or emotional. People with high sense of emotion who are thought to be less successful may get to high standard achievements.in contrast, realistic people may harm themselves because of following their logical decisions radically.
In conclusion, humans’ are so complicated to decide about their success by just one parameter. Also, these feelings bond together so much that a person can not isolate them completely.so, I request that we should try not to block any of our feelings since they push us toward a better life simultaneously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r they have a good life or not. However, some other people believe that they can ...
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...on who are thought to be less successful may get to high standard achievements.in...
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...us toward a better life simultaneously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, in contrast, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80901856764 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66686307724 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549071618037 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5104068003 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.647058824 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268412622998 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823527104474 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055842838166 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157598207936 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638063441842 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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