Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
There has been a long debate as to whether we should get up early in the morning to complete our day's work. From my perspective, I hold the view that it would be efficient on the work when we get up early since we can have breakfast to full of our energy and reply email on the first time.
To begin with, breakfast, not only is the meal to charge our mind but is a starting signal of one day. Admittedly, getting up later may make you feeling better but there is a report written by the scientists from University of Cambridge it shows there would be no benefit to your body because in the morning you need to have some full of protein food or else your body cannot keep a good state for a long time. So, why don't we get up early and have a delicious food in the morning.
Moreover, as I am a IT engineer, I have to get up early to reply some emails from our consumers, which include the program bug or some advice of improving the functions. I can arrange the day's plans to arrange what I have to accomplish today that can improve my working efficiency and it made me confident to face the day's work. Furthermore, I can watch the TV to get the latest economical news and predict the later trend of the stock, which it is essential for me to decide what stock should I buy.
In a nutshell, get up early in the morning have many benefits for us such as charging energy, arranging our plan and getting the latest news. We can get up later on weekends because getting up later is an opportunity to relax our mind and eliminate the exhausted. But should not get up later every day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
There has been a long debate as to whether we should get up early in the morning t...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...p a good state for a long time. So, why dont we get up early and have a delicious fo...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: a; IT
...od in the morning. Moreover, as I am a IT engineer, I have to get up early to rep...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'engineers'?
Suggestion: engineers
... the morning. Moreover, as I am a IT engineer, I have to get up early to reply some e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, may, moreover, so, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22368421053 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36593436709 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496710526316 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3108000372 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.727272727 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316987542904 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150672396244 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639092728445 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215603453821 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334472602904 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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