Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late night at night. Which one do you prefer?
There are two different attitudes about getting up. Some people prefer to wake up early in the morning. Others, however, prefer to wake up later and work until late night. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to wake up early. This essay will provide some reasons to support this idea as follows.
First of all, wake up in the morning helps people’s body to work better and function properly. One of the most significant benefits of waking up early is that people do their task more efficient; therefore, productivity increase. According to the recent research which published by Michigan health institution (MHI), people who wake up early have better performance about solving mathematic problems. Also, their creativity increase 35 percent in compare to people who get up late. These results show that some jobs such as marker analyzers, doctors, athletes have to get up early. In addition, waking early helps people feel more healthy and happy during the day.
Furthermore, wake up in the morning provide more time for people to do their jobs. In compare of people who get up late, people who wake up early have far more time to spend with their family and friends. Since, most of people prefer to spends their days in communication with others, while allocate their nights to sleep or personal interesting. Moreover, almost all organizations have a certain time for work which is often start from early morning until noon like banks, governmental offices, schools, etc. For instance, as I am an investment employee, I have to get up early to read critical news before start my job or go to bank to check my account’s transactions.
In conclusion, personally I prefer to wake up in the morning and start my day early. I presented some reasons and expressed example to support my idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...d with their family and friends. Since, most of people prefer to spends their days in communic...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'spend'.
Suggestion: spend
...riends. Since, most of people prefer to spends their days in communication with others...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89836065574 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70640594943 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531147540984 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.121250264 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450383043186 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158955478275 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939918982723 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297653440326 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701826463979 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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