I prefer to live with a roommate rather than alone. Splitting a room with someone could be cheaper and good to have a good company. There are my two reasons to support my opinion.
First, nowadays rentals are very expensive and a lot of people have the desire to live out of their parent's house. Living with a roommate can solve this two things. Because they can split the cost of living. When I started my graduation, years ago, I let out my parent's house and I went to live alone in an apartment, because of I was a student I could not work and I needed to call a friend of mine, that- had in the same situation than me, and we split our bills. It was a good idea for me and him because we didn't have money to live alone. this worked very well for both. We only needed to worry only about our graduation.
Second, sometimes we need to someone to encourage us to never give up, maybe our parents or friends even a girlfriend can do this, in a calling or a text message but the better way to do this is face a face. Nobody better to do this than our roommate, because they will no the real problem and the circumstances. Last year when I finished my studies at the university I started to search for a job to make money. I had three job options. The first one was in a different from my graduation and very far away from my home. The second was all that I have dreamed and was exactly about my graduation but the problem was the time because was in the night. The third was not too far from my house and even did not about my graduation, they gave the expective to grow in the company and working in something that I learned in my university. The guy that helped me a lot was my roommate because he knew everything about my life and we was closer to me. He showed all the benefits to choose the third one and I decided to accept their devices.
In conclusion, living with a roommate can make things better to not spend a lot of money and to have a person to ask for help any time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, third, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13402061856 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3054609925 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474226804124 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4776428585 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110991959594 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470737714857 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877443586408 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103949122383 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661301632451 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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