When is time to decide between living alone or with a roommate is difficult for some students because is something new and no one knows what is going to happen. In my opinion I prefer live with a roommate.
Exists some advantages to love alone, like expanding your knowledge alone, discovering the world alone without distorting. In addition, it helps to create more independence, since you are without the help of your parents. For example, I am studying in New York, this is my first time here, so I want to go to the downtown but my roommate not. One of the rule of the freshman dormitory is that you can not leave your roommate alone. This creates a dependency on my roommate that does not make me discover what is around me
On the other hand, there are more advantages to live with a roommate. To begin, you learn from differents culture, languages and social aspects. Living with roommate helps to socialise more. For example, you are new in college and you feel lonely, you need someone to talk to, laugh with or ask for help, choosing to live with roomate helps to create friends. It also helps you to be more tolerant since you will go through things that you will not like much, however the only solution is to hold it or talk hastily.
As a conclusion there are some advantages that live alone but it depends on the personality of the person and what does really want. But in my opinion I prefer living with a roommate because the benefits are more similar to my personality.
- It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 60
- some people prefer to live with a roommate. others prefer to live alone. compare the advantages of each choice. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should take out student loans to avoid working while studying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 40
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... the world alone without distorting. In addition it helps to create more independence, s...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to live'
Suggestion: to live
...o, laugh with or ask for help, choosing live with roomate helps to create friends. I...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a respectful way" with adverb for "respectful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ly solution is to hold it or talk to it in a respectful way. As a conclusion there are some advant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48518708144 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496350364964 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1946742201 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8461538462 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253908894185 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115310098068 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113703278285 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186305612891 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869464936139 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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