Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
it is important that people live in a modern environment where person can improve skills and get behind of world. personally, I believe that people need to live in a big city and do not lose big opportunities. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, in a big city big opportunities such as qualified education, more people to communicate and self-development. I mean with qualified education, in a big city you can learn by hard science and languages. Self-development is the main thing in our life. when person communicate with people, he can open himself and know more about human qualities. my own experience is a compelling example of this. when I moved abroad from Jalal-Abad to Bishkek, I experienced it. I started to go courses, be more social person and open my talants.
Secondly, in small town you do not know anything about fashion, personal abilities and these kind of things. big city means more modern than small town. when person get behind of modern world, human lose his meaning of life. Everyday our life and life conditions change. we can not even be with other people. person born to develop himself and the world. For instance, I am volunteering in some organizations. Every day their goal is changing. it means that we should be in time of everything.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that person should live there where he can develop. this is because of big city opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84126984127 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95914696635 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4493697656 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0952380952 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132509323231 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379671242508 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469550765396 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965856386492 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479026172114 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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