Some people prefer to live in a small town Others prefer to live in a big city Which place would you prefer to live in Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
In this modern era, living is getting complex either people live in small town or a big city as demands of technology are increasing living in big city is a great opportunity. Some people believe that it is more important to live in big cities while other disagree. In my view, though both have their pros and cons, but I prefer to live in a city. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, there are lot of jobs and different ways to earn money. To life a good life money is the first priority because without money you can not do anything. For instance, when I was young I lived with my grand parents in a small town, as I grow up there were no good university. I always wanted to be a doctor to save humans lives. In addition, my grand mother sent me to a city to further continue my education and I enrolled myself in top universities but the fees was to high. My friend hire me in her company for a part time job and I startes to earn a lillte amount that helped me to pay my fees otherwise I can never become a doctor. Thus, this example elucidates that without job if you do not have money, your future will be dark.
Secondly, by the help of technology you can get some free time to spend with your family. Machines have made our life easier they do work in seconds that takes a lot of time. It is important to spend some time with children. For instance, when I was in town my grand mother always worked hard, as we do not have such facilities and sometimes I became frustated when do not have anything except work. Since, I moved to urban area I realized that besides working hard family time is essential. Now in free time I share numerous things with my friends which makes me feel comfortable and keeps me away from depression. Therefore, this instance illustrates the importance of spare time for family.
To wrap up, living in big town will help to maintain the standards of life. In my opinion, life of a city is so fascinating especially for the upcoming youth. They can get good education, jobs and a thousand time better life style.
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... when do not have anything except work. Since, I moved to urban area I realized that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33830845771 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42870672805 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52736318408 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5145526047 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0476190476 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215982519875 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650183719449 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911385540367 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157811431924 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16084180582 0.0645574589148 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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