Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
time is valuable part in people life which quality utilization harbour success; otherwise yields only loss. Some people like spend most of time with their friends as they want to enjoy more companionship. However, people spend their time in solitude and to use it to do something productive actually benefit them. personally, I prefer to spend my most of the time alone. I feel this way for two reasons which I explore in later paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is in isolation person can shape their task in more prominent way as they are unlikely have disturbance in their work. they can enjoy a plenty of time without thinking other aspects of life. In fact, they can gaze their all concentration on trying to focus on their work so that they can make their work impressive as well as impeccable. For example, when I was in high school, I had to do presentation on "Women development". during that time, I resolute that I would not meet my any friends and whole time I would give full effort on my work; I had thought entire time how could I improve my work and rigorously acted upon it. As a result, I achieved best presentation award. On the other hand, after that work, deep in my conscience, I felt bit upgraded in my personality and my oral skills. Had I fooled around with my friend instead doing hard work, I probably would not have received that wisdom and eulogy from my faculty.
Secondly, people can create new innovative idea after spending more time alone because they can explore their mental imagination. being alone, people have privilege to ruminate and analyse the fact. they can go further deeper and deeper in their inner world so bringing the more impressing idea. For instance, few time earlier, my brother who is very enthusiastic to compose new song, struggle to compose new fascinating song. he did not find any context where he could work upon. Then, he decided to go for the long travel far from the home alone where he could find serenity. Suprisinlgy, after his came back from the trip he had a very positive vibes within him. furthermore, he had also composed new song which was very mellifluous to hear. According to him, he had found peace after he had gone from home and it later helped him to draw away his tension and brought relief in him. with this change in his inner realm, he had improvised new song. Since solitude is essential for draw away mental traffic, it can make person more sagacious in thought.
To wrap up, one can soon realize that how living in solitude can make better person in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68791208791 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56508092272 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531868131868 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0632777212 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.32 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245931810309 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078821409059 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111815976223 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167932212023 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1737534791 0.0645574589148 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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