Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which do you agree with?
Internet benefits people all around the globe in so many aspects. It provides us a new way of communications, entertainment, and getting informations. Among these benefits, receiving informations change the way we learn and it is one of the major improvements of our lives these days.
Take Coursera as an example, the online courses make it easier to access knowlodges that we may not able to learn in the past. We can now simply click on the subscribe button and start a online course of Spanish speaking, software programming, and any other courses from a broad spectrum. And there are forums which students from different areas could exchange ideas about the contents of the classes without having a face-to-face talk.
Besides, through social network, anyone could upload or receive news instantly. With merely a second, news of elections from Europe or wars in Middle East could trasfer to anywhere in the globe. This gives us a much faster way of receiving news than we did back then.
Although some parents may concern that the easy access to informations could defect children's growth, it is parents' duty to teach their children which is bad.
Due to the reasons above, easy access to valuable informations definitely out perform the disavantages.
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- Playing computer games is a waste of time Children should not be allowed to play them 80
- In many organizations, perhaps the best way to approach certain new projects is to assemble a group of people into a team. Having a team of people attack a project offers several advantages. First of all, a group of people has a wider range of knowledge, 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...in the past. We can now simply click on the subscribe button and start a online course of Spa...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...click on the subscribe button and start a online course of Spanish speaking, soft...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13942307692 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81042000667 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2167935223 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1818181818 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150775317174 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498636321009 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042546779264 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752047616087 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284472668812 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.