Nowadays, the Internet is becoming the key parts of our life. We can't imagine a days without internet. It makes our life easier and better. Now, we are able to find every information on the internet including various valuable information. So, in my view, the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information in a minute. Some may oppose this but I agree with this for some reasons.
The main reason is that it makes people life easier by providing valuable information in a short time. If someone needs any information he can find on the internet easily by searching this. It will take a moment to find. For example, I am fond of traveling, I travel too many if get any free time. Every time I try to go to explore a new place and I have to collect information about this place. Here, the internet helps me a lot with providing every corner of information about this place. After getting all the necessary information, I can travel without any hassles regarding this place. As we can see, the internet helps a lot without creating any problems to find information about a place.
Another reason is that the internet helps to save time and costs. If we have no access to the internet, it will be time-consuming and expensive to find any kind of information. For instance, most of the students need to find information about there research topics. If they have no internet, it will be more complex to find. They have to go somewhere to find materials relating to his research which is time-consuming as well as costly. Sometimes they have to pay to buy many unnecessary things to find a piece of small information. On the other hand, if they have internet access, they could find online without wasting the important time of traveling and can save the cost. So, it can demonstrate that internet accesses help to save time and cost for many students.
The last reason is that we can find the required information from everywhere at any time if we have an internet connection. On the internet, everything can be found everywhere with internet access. For example, I can able to know the recent news about any country from my room via the internet. Not only this I can find information about any topics which not require exact clarification. We can find everything about a topic by searching on the internet with nearly related to the context.
In sum, some may think access to much information through internet can create some problems, but it will help people to find information easily from anywhere with less time and cost. So, everyone should use the internet to make life more easy and time-saving.
- In 1995 a microscopic fungus called phytophthora ramorum, or P. ramorum, was first detected in the forests of the western United States. P. ramorum infects trees and causes particularly serious damage in oak trees: in many infected oaks, leaves wither rap 3
- TPO 12 Integrated Writing (Jane Austin) 75
- TPO 45- independent writing taskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use s 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- In 1995 a microscopic fungus called phytophthora ramorum, or P. ramorum, was first detected in the forests of the western United States. P. ramorum infects trees and causes particularly serious damage in oak trees: in many infected oaks, leaves wither rap 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... becoming the key parts of our life. We cant imagine a days without internet. It mak...
^^^^
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... key parts of our life. We cant imagine a days without internet. It makes our life eas...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'opposes'.
Suggestion: opposes
...uable information in a minute. Some may oppose this but I agree with this for some rea...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g valuable information in a short time. If someone needs any information he can fi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71459694989 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70878566102 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424836601307 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4623507907 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6206896552 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8275862069 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86206896552 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247263849755 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817246165365 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085188124239 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179953837175 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789371375328 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.