Some people think that automobile has improved modern life. Other think that automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion?
In today's hectic world, in which life has trials and tribulations all people around the globe looking for better life. People have different points of view about lifestyle regarding the trends of modern life. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether cars developed modern life or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that nowadays car provides an opportunity for people to live easier and benefits from many advantages of it. In the following paragraph I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that nowadays automobile play a key role in every single facet of whole societies. One of the most important role, which cars play is helping development of public transportation. Scientifically speaking, vast majorities of people have to commute long distances in order to arrive to their destination in time. In the past, people faced various difficulties and hardly ever got to their works on time due to restriction of public transportation. Delving further into the issue reveals that with the advent of new technologies and the expansion of public transportation such as buses people commute to their destinations easier and as quickly as possible. Indeed, use of new automobiles in transportation not only is beneficial for myriads of people but also beneficial in order to reduce air pollution. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country; show that crowds of society revolutionized with the expansion of transportation system because they are able to not only transport people to their destinations but also other goods to different areas.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that automobiles bring many benefits to every society such as job opportunity. Broadly speaking, day in day out with the expansion of population vast majorities of people will looking for decent job. In fact, car firms will provide fertile ground for people to find their ideal job. Not only can people work as an employee in the companies but also can work as a driver. To put it in other word, automobile can bring myriads of advantage in different realm. Indeed, not until automobile has improved can the society progress. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, cars will contribute to a great deal of pollution and traffic jam, which can affect society negatively and prevent people from lead a healthy lifestyle. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, due to influential item, automobiles play a key role in all around the world. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that new cars can contribute to expansion of public transportation system. In addition, it will provide people with job opportunity, which is beneficial for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
...pulation vast majorities of people will looking for decent job. In fact, car firms will...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260223048327 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.126394052045 0.158761421928 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10780669145 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0687732342007 0.046263068375 149% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0297397769517 0.0685040099705 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139405204461 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0334572490706 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06813465336 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408921933086 0.0309702414327 132% => OK
Particles: 0.00185873605948 0.00188951952338 98% => OK
Determiners: 0.0706319702602 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0223048327138 0.0209618222197 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148698884758 0.0139019557991 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3050.0 2387.08602151 128% => OK
No of words: 491.0 408.028673835 120% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21181262729 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38900203666 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281059063136 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20366598778 0.174417080927 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.16700610998 0.112833075102 148% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06813465336 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50916496945 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 59.929099958 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4583333333 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8098069585 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4583333333 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.564239647 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.92561983471 1.45489161554 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135926084008 0.300154397459 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0977706348692 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.06812910099 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.449773454894 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108100855341 0.151897553556 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554684672666 0.114077575197 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458417930579 0.0781384742642 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.429090693426 0.336927656856 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0241129526224 0.067059652881 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105212207513 0.210909579961 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037712637668 0.0618886996521 61% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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