These days, many people watch various TV programs. For example, drama, entertainment, movies etc. Some people think classic movies or TV shows have greater value than new films. However, I disagree with this statement. I have three reasons to support my opinion.
First, new dramas or movies have many different stories. In the past, dramas and movies the story was very simple and obvious. On the other hand, these days many dramas or movies are very stimulating and come out on various themes. Therefore, TV ratings have also increased significantly. For example, in some dramas, there are terrible scenes of burning flesh with a curling iron, and the life of various professions is shown in a drama. Also, there are many programs related with normal people, so many people feel fun to watch.
Second, it is because the filming technology has diverse. In the past, there were not many types of cameras, so the resolution was not that good. Today, however, we feel more lively because the camera quilty is good and the filming techniques are diverse so that we can feel like actors are acting in front of me. In addition, in the past, sound effects and songs were simple and people did not pay much attention, but these days, OST is very good, so it makes drama and movie contents richer. For instance, these days, Reply 1988, A wise doctors’s life are very famous because of good OST.
Last, the theme of a drama or movie fits the trend these days. In the past, drama situations and backgrounds were set according to the old times. Therefore, if you look at the old ones, there might be parts that you can not relate to. On contrary, these days, it is more fun to enjoy the drama because it fits the current situation and people are interested in it. For example, a drama about the competitive society for entrance exams that usually occurs in Korea these days has become very popular.
This is why I think new films are more enjoyable than old one. These days, drama and movies are of much higher quality, so it is bound to be more fun.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...n. First, new dramas or movies have many different stories. In the past, dramas and movies...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69613259669 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31402031706 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511049723757 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8863887335 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9130434783 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7391304348 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250666669554 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819737520443 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118517349103 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175059069944 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117560865898 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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