No one can cast doubt on the fact that in the last few decades, the education system has changed drastically in which education has become the utmost priority for children. On that ground, considering its paramount importance, school organizations have been trying to improve ways whereby students could learn the best level of education. In this regard, some people contend that field trip is a very substantial way to provide education to students. On the other hand, another group of people considers it as an exaggeration and apparently, hold opinions in favor of traditional-style classroom studies. Admittedly, the former view contains more weight. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my stance.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that conducting a field trip aids students to gain overall knowledge, and so, their final grades in the exam. In fact, field trip always provides an enormous amount of practical exposure whereby students could learn a lot of practical things in real life. This exposure can be proved to life-memorable experience which is hard to forget in the whole life. On the contrary, the knowledge earned from academic books is really boring and unrealistic which students might forget in a short time. Drawing from my own example to shed light on what has been elaborated above. My school organized a historic trip on the Hiddapa culture, in my ninth grade. They took us to the land where the people of Hiddapa culture used to stay before five hundred years. It was a fascinating experience to know that being in lack of advanced technology, how those people lived gracefully, and the culture and rituals used by those dwellers. Later on, when questions were asked in my exam related to Hiddapa culture, I was able to write all the answers appropriately. Hence, had I missed the opportunity to go on the field trip, I might not have scored well in my history paper.
Another reason which deserves some words is that collecting the practical knowledge could also substantiate the justifiability of the claim made at the outset of this essay. To be more specific, students learn a lot of things on these trips. One of them is that they can have a vivid idea of how theoretical applications that they learn in the school could be applicable in the real field. Accordingly, this real-time experience can clear their theoretical doubts too. For instance, last year, when I was a freshman at university, I had studied a topic named solar plant energy in my science class. It was very hard to learn mathematical data and design in this topic. However, when I got an opportunity to visit a solar energy plant since my uncle works there, it enriched my view about the design of the solar plant and I learned that how solar energy is transformed into electric energy through huge solar machinery. Thereby, it is reasonable to say it is hard to grasp such theoretical knowledge without seeing the real field of work.
Ultimately, there are some advantages of studying in the classrooms that we cannot ignore. Indeed, it is not possible to learn practical knowledge without the help of theoretical knowledge which students usually grasp during classroom studies. Nevertheless, this concern can be eliminated if students are provided classroom education with field exposure.
All in all, from contemplating all remarks, even though some may disagree with my viewpoint, I strongly believe that field trips are crucial for efficient learning than staying in the class and solely reading books. Not only it boosts students’ academic knowledge for gaining the best marks in the exams, but also it gives them real exposure to what they study in their schools.
- TPO 11 Integrated Writing Task 70
- TPO 41 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
- A D It is better to take risks and explore new things when you are older than when you are young 3
- whether should parents tell their children to choose a major leading to a good job with a high salary or to follow a major in which they are interested in 73
- Describing the ways in which elephants fascinate humans TPO51 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, well, for instance, in fact, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3136.0 1977.66487455 159% => OK
No of words: 624.0 407.700716846 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02564102564 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99799879888 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8050988344 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 320.0 212.727598566 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 967.5 618.680645161 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0757850419 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.137931034 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5172413793 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41379310345 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194166241028 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049891785215 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375195998383 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114602399723 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400380015142 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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