Some people think it is luck that is behind success, others think it is hard working, what opinion do you prefer?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that with the advancement in technology and modernization of world, it is extremely arduous for people to take our their time for themselves. In this regard, recreational activities and leisure trips are of paramount importance. Vividly, it provides people with a sense of achievement and relaxation. There are different schools of thought amongst people to schedule their trip. Where some consider planning their vacation with a tour guide, others contemplate to plan their trip by themselves with family member. In my opinion, I would agree to go to trip by myself. In what follows, I will delve into most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint. The first reason coming to my mind to elucidate my standpoint is associated with the benefits that come with going by oneself. People have more flexibility they can plan their trip according to their own schedule. It is axiomatic that in this fast paced world people scarcely take out time for trip, so whenever they can they want to enjoy their time with full zest and freedom. Especially, when family members are accompanying too, people have long personal preferable places to explore. Not to mention, it provides people with an opportunity to spend time according to their wish. For instance some people like to read a book, others like to hear music, going by oneself provides oneself a chance to fulfill its wishes. By way of illustration, last year,I planned my vacation with my husband to Niagra falls. I have the habit to read the book while journeying silently. my husband turned off the music in his car. We made a list to explore many places there, but we had not included the places which we had already seen before. we woke up late, and as soon as woke we left to explore the locations. We had enormous fun. If we went wity the tourist guide we might not had that much freedom The second rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that going with the guide though provides you with valuable experience, but now a days with the advancement in society almost every restaurant, or hotel is equipped with a tourist guide book that limitise the need of guide. It is noticeable that while planning a trip with a guide, a person cannot enjoy his freedom and is supposed to go everywhere that was prioritized by the guide or his company. On top, planning a tour with guide was extremely expensive, as the guide charges a huge amount for their services. For instance, if we had planned our previous year's trip with a guide,we would not have explored the places fully according to our will. Moreover, we had to spend more for that trip and had not enjoyed our personal space because of a huge crowd. It is crystal clear why going alone is better. By perusing above paragraphs, one can infer that going out for vacation by oneself or without a tour guide is the real excitement and it doubles the fun. For the sake of brevity, few points are worth reiterating. First, going by themselves will provide the people with a myriad of advantages. Second, going with tour guide restricts individuals and limited their fun. As for writer's opinion i vehemently advice people to plan their trip themselves and cherish themselves with valuable experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: We
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, as for, for instance, by and large, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2692.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 562.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79003558719 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62862161601 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480427046263 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 846.0 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6199820375 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0715176861114 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0222273792894 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261593129276 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715176861114 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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