In today's knowledge based economy learning in different level of life has become an important part of our life. Everyone has their own preference of learning method. Some people will argue that they can better learn themselves, other may disagree. I believe learning with a teacher is more effective in many ways.
First a teacher can help you to concentrate in the studies, where toddlers face difficulties due to the multiple distractions around. Today’s children are habituated with numerous electronic gadgets like Mobile phone. tablet, game consoles etc. Most of the children are attracted to these rather than studies. As a result, during study whenever they are faced with some difficult topic their concentration flaks and move into nearby amusement. But if he is with a teacher then he will be obliged by his sense of manner and refrain himself from these kind of side activities. As a result, they can better concentrate on the topic and learn it deeply.
Secondly students, most of the time, have an inflated idea of their own knowledge and ability to solve a problem, originated from the shallow knowledge about the topic. A teacher is the best person here to inform the student about the reality and prepare them to learn and grasp the knowledge to the level required. This happens more in today's internet based generation. Everyone seems to know everything with a click of a button, which has even been declared as a phobia named "Seems Know". But in reality formalised knowledge is not comparable to internet based information. Basically knowledge helps human to identify problem pattern and see the big picture around it rather small specific details, which are floated in the internet. Just like knowing automobile and driving a car is not the same thing.
In conclusion, I strongly prefer a teacher led learning process. I feel like this mainly since the children can better concentrate in the presence of a teacher and the formalized knowledge a teacher can provide to his student and help him to understand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tablet
...s electronic gadgets like Mobile phone. tablet, game consoles etc. Most of the childre...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ense of manner and refrain himself from these kind of side activities. As a result, they c...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
... strongly prefer a teacher led learning process. I feel like this mainly since the chil...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245382585752 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.187335092348 0.158761421928 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.065963060686 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0316622691293 0.046263068375 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0554089709763 0.0685040099705 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116094986807 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0554089709763 0.0351676179071 158% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74431847981 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0316622691293 0.0309702414327 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105540897098 0.0887237588012 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0211081794195 0.0209618222197 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105540897098 0.0139019557991 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2052.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 338.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.07100591716 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37573964497 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310650887574 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207100591716 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12426035503 0.112833075102 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74431847981 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 63.3782652864 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.9 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8245365064 48.84282405 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.644075263715 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 47.9650887574 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.51923076923 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222424908511 0.300154397459 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0597692706196 0.103427244359 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0831801994529 0.0752933317313 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.427978608423 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175724603579 0.151897553556 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763232835389 0.114077575197 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665068385149 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291139679113 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104848447181 0.067059652881 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156186850269 0.210909579961 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261258168546 0.0618886996521 42% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.