Some people think that they can learn much more by themselves than if they work with a teacher Others think that it is always better to get help from a skilled teacher Which do you prefer Use specific reasons to support your choice

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...among people who want to be educated. although some people like to study on their own ...
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...l this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in following paragraphs. t...
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... will explore in following paragraphs. to begin with, teachers are trained and ed...
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...o convey information in a more effective and convenient way. instructors spend se...
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... a more effective and convenient way. instructors spend several years in the universities...
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...hey can teach students in proper ways. as a result they can help us understand co...
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...they can help us understand concepts and idea of lessons in a simple way. my own ...
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...derstand concepts and idea of lessons in a simple way. my own experience is a compelling exam...
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...rience is a compelling example of this. when I was at high school I had to remembe...
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...rience is a compelling example of this. when I was at high school I had to remembe...
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...ic table which is contained all chemical substances. At first I thought that I co...
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... substances. At first I thought that I couldnt learn them at all due to the fact that ...
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...all due to the fact that it has a huge names with its details. However, my teacher t...
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...acher thought me a very simple way which all chemicals have their own sorts with ...
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...wn sorts with specific characteristics. as a result I used that way and now afte...
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...characteristics. as a result I used that way and now after 5 years I still rememb...
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...st of the chemicals with their traits. if I hadnt a teacher who had hands-on expe...
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...xperience ,I would never learn that much information. second, learning by themse...
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...d never learn that much information. second, learning by themselves are very time a...
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...ion about topics we are reading about. as a result, we have to spend a lot of tim...
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...hat they have first hand information and practical educators to teach us in a way...
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...teach us in a way with remarkable ease. and also it takes less time .
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...kable ease. and also it takes less time .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74932614555 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7596235767 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544474393531 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8809665553 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6086956522 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1304347826 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208925148544 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549521957024 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375756806986 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547407330626 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405440550427 0.0645574589148 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.