Some people think that the use of mobile phones should be banned in public places such as in libraries, shops and on public transport. to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
It is believed by many that the cellular phones should be barred from use in many places like libraries, shopping centres and while using public transport. Although the increasing use of cellular is a noteworthy issue, I firmly disagree with the view of banning these in any of these places as the over-usage of cells is more of a behavioural problem rather than a global one, and this can be controlled at personal levels.
Banning mobiles at some social places is not an appropriate act as nowadays, these are not considered as luxuries, but necessities. Not every person is using mobiles for leisure activities, there are many who actually utilize it for some creative purposes. Cell phones now have latest technology and interesting applications which are used by many people globally for variety of reasons such as business, education, hobbies and many more. An individual in library for instance, might require to refer to sites such as Google, for any query related to the books he is referring to. While using public transport as well, mobiles can play a significant role of entertainment or the camera can be used for capturing memories too. Moreover, shops can be another place where a person might have to use his cellular for inquiring anything from his family. Hence, banning mobiles specifically for any place such as libraries, shops or public transportation is irrelevant as it all depend on an individual's needs.
Furthermore, mobiles play a key role for connecting everyone to their families and in case of any emergencies, these play a vital role to connect with close ones. However, there are other options like silent mode or vibration mode available on mobile phones which can actually notify the user without causing any sort of disturbance to others. these options can be effectively used in places like libraries, where it is strongly recommended to do so. Watching a mobile without any sound by using headphones is another way of entertaining oneself in public transport without deterring peace of others.
To conclude, banning the cellular is not a suitable solution as it is a basic requirement these days, nevertheless, there are many other options by which these can be used appropriately without the risk of disturbing fellow mates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ioural problem rather than a global one, and this can be controlled at personal l...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the latest'.
Suggestion: have the latest
...some creative purposes. Cell phones now have latest technology and interesting applications...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'referring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: referring
... in library for instance, might require to refer to sites such as Google, for any query ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...sing any sort of disturbance to others. these options can be effectively used in plac...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended doing'.
Suggestion: recommended doing
...es like libraries, where it is strongly recommended to do so. Watching a mobile without any sound...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07754010695 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86142856917 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516042780749 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9944116788 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.642857143 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31224292435 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12020477335 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791620445694 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186110448598 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833625432442 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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