Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone.
Which do you prefer?
Traveling is a global passion affecting people of all ages. It is expected that when you go into a journey, alone or with a companion, you will be able to meet new ineffable places and explore the world having completely different experiences, however, both innovative. I prefer to travel with somebody, a friend or relative, rather than alone. I feel this for the following reasons.
Firstly, traveling with someone else is frugal and advantageous for saving money. This is because the costs of travel, such as food and transportation, can be shared. Moreover, a double room in a hotel is more affordable than a single room. Therefore, it is possible to save money because a wide range of trip packages for groups are available for a reduced price. For instance, last year I paid three times less when I traveled with coworkers for a work trip than when I had gone alone to the same trip.
Secondly, it can be safer to travel accompanied, mainly women because of the exacerbated gender crimes in the region. Many locals are not indicated to go alone and should be avoided. Tranquility and safeness are crucial factors in all trips. People feel more confident when traveling with somebody because there is always someone to rely on. For example, it is difficult for a lone traveler to deal with all bags with nobody to help when they require going somewhere in the airport or to request information. Furthermore, it is significantly risky to be stolen if the baggage is left alone.
Finally, experiencing amazing days with someone will generate life-lasting memories, therefore, it is an opportunity to grow together personally and professionally. Although travel's reason is amusement or vacation, traveling, mainly abroad, is a mutual and concomitant process of learning and teaching. Travelers have to deal with challenging everyday situations. For example, communicating in a language that you do not speak and always being polite even when others are not.
To sum up, I strongly prefer to travel with a companion, a friend or relative. This is because it is cheaper, safer and an exceptional enhancement experience both personally and professionally.
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- TOEFL T P O 10 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08707865169 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01325162078 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1963341091 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2380952381 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9523809524 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295561609255 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879244084091 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867993704808 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175843331267 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649854705817 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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