Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone.
Which do you prefer?
Traveling is a global passion affecting people of all ages. It is expected that when you go into a journey, alone or with a companion, you will be able to meet new ineffable places and explore the world having completely different experiences, however, both innovative. I prefer to travel with somebody, a friend or relative, rather than alone. I feel this for the following reasons.
Firstly, traveling with someone else is frugal. This is because the costs of travel, such as food and transportation, can be shared. Moreover, a double room in a hotel is more affordable than a single room. Therefore, it is possible to save money because a wide range of trip packages for groups are available for a reduced price. For instance, last year I paid three times less when I traveled with coworkers for a work trip than when I had gone to the same trip alone.
Secondly, it can be safer to travel accompanied, mainly to women. Many locals are not indicated to go alone and should be avoided. Tranquility and safeness are crucial factors in all trips. People feel more confident when traveling with somebody because there is always someone to rely on. For example, it is difficult for a lone traveler to deal with all bags with nobody to help when they require to go somewhere in the airport or to request information. Furthermore, it is risky to be stolen if the bags are left alone.
Finally, experiencing amazing days with someone will generate life-lasting memories, therefore, it is an opportunity to grow together personally and professionally. Traveling, mainly to abroad, is a mutual and concomitant process of learning and teaching. Travelers have to deal with challenging everyday situations. For example, communicating in a language that you do not speak and always being polite even when others are not.
To sum up, I strongly prefer to travel with a companion, a friend or relative. This is because it is cheaper, safer and an exceptional enhancement experience both personally and professionally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...s with nobody to help when they require to go somewhere in the airport or to request ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9940652819 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98702091319 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551928783383 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.500775399 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1428571429 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0476190476 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303727961425 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088935849299 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895127781656 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175982355048 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626564357132 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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