Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Considering traveling alone or traveling with a companion, I strongly incline to take the side of traveling with a companion. With respect to the different characteristics among humans, it goes without saying that traveling with a companion can be implied as a great experience compared with traveling alone. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, with respect to the entertainment aspect of traveling, the presence of a companion can be considered as an great opportunity to enjoy more from the journey. For instance, the speaking about the memorable and humorous stuff, having a meal together, etc can be implied as main advantages of the companion presence during the journey when it comes to the entertainment.
Another primary reason of my preference to travel with a companion can be contributed to the trip cost. It is obvious that the cost of a special trip particularly the accommodation expense in travelling with a companion will be much less than traveling alone. In this case, not only there is remarkable reduction in the accommodation cost will achieve, but also the restaurant cost decreases too.
In addition, being one of the most proliferated issue in traveling, the safety of trip plays a crucial role. For example, if some unpleasant events happen, the companion can bring up some ideas to manage them. In addition, considering adventure traveling, the experienced companion can provide a substantial sense of security when it comes to the safety of the trip. As current psychological findings reveal, there is an especially strong emotional bond between the level of satisfaction and the presence of an experienced companion. Neither traveling cost nor entertainment can be denoted as a critical factor as the trip safety. As a result, the experienced companion can be attributed as a fundamental part of the trip.
Taking all these perspectives into account, I prefer to travel with a companion regarding the entertainment subjects, cost, and safety. Although, the presence of a companion without the mentioned characteristics is last cause, to my best knowledge, it is more advisable to travel with a prefect companion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, speaking about, as a result, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29014084507 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2107560749 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495774647887 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7385799067 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23892470039 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953811229234 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847226541221 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156637883073 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877643755865 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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