Some people like to work in teams. Others prefer to work alone. Which do you prefer? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays people are more busier than before. They have to manage their jobs, families and many thing on time. This causes that people fulfill their jobs in the group or team. Despite this fact, some people believe in working alone. They are against the team jobs. In the team work, the project tasks have divided into people that named team members which was instructed by the leader. The team work has many advantages over solitary work. These are distribution of task among others, assistant of members and friendship with new people.
In the team work, members could share their ideas and thoughts with each other. This may cause many consequences, for example with the presentation of ideas, members and also leader could argue about suggestions and finally find the pros and cons of each one. Eventually, they will choose the best thought. Although it will be beneficial for the result of the project, some members may not happy about this, because their ideas may not considered.
Since the project will conduct to many people and tasks divide between members, it will finish earlier. Everyone will assign to do jobs in their experienced field. for instances, Consider the project that needs to have background information in mathematics, while you are familiar in mentioned field. On the other hand, definition and explanation duties for people is omitted in working alone and ones has to solve problems individually. Furthermore in the solitary work the need to organizing and planning the team is eliminated.
Other profit of working with members is having friendship with new people. Working with our team partners may lead to have friendship and enjoy being with each other. Conversely, In the solitary work , the tasks will fulfill lonely which may be uninteresting.
As I previously mentioned, ones holding the projects, must gather people in the team to divide tasks between members so the time spending for project will be minimized. In addition, projects will not have best result unless team work does not employed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'busier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: busier
Nowadays people are more busier than before. They have to manage their ...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... to do jobs in their experienced field. for instances, Consider the project that ne...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...nes has to solve problems individually. Furthermore in the solitary work the need to organi...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'need to organize'?
Suggestion: need to organize
...y. Furthermore in the solitary work the need to organizing and planning the team is eliminated. ...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... other. Conversely, In the solitary work , the tasks will fulfill lonely which may...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...teresting. As I previously mentioned, ones holding the projects, must gather peopl...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
...nimized. In addition, projects will not have best result unless team work does not employ...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'employ'
Suggestion: employ
...e best result unless team work does not employed.
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ult unless team work does not employed.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258666666667 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.165333333333 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.056 0.0866891130778 65% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0426666666667 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0346666666667 0.0685040099705 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0506666666667 0.0351676179071 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52150297993 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0213333333333 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.088 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0426666666667 0.0209618222197 204% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0106666666667 0.0139019557991 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2038.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 335.0 408.028673835 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08358208955 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346268656716 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25671641791 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155223880597 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0985074626866 0.112833075102 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52150297993 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516417910448 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.0082488889 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.2272727273 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6446248688 48.84282405 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6363636364 120.699889404 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2272727273 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.644075263715 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 40.8989145183 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.83516483516 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20511966091 0.300154397459 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133566863773 0.103427244359 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.095749706051 0.0752933317313 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497361075554 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147944946238 0.151897553556 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837431651556 0.114077575197 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492849421433 0.0781384742642 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278593804194 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0525905167835 0.067059652881 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141779864077 0.210909579961 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683700344599 0.0618886996521 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.