Studies is a better way that helps one to attain some level of enlightenment. In studying, some people prefer to use different method that would help them to be more knowledgeable. The prompt maintains that some person's prefer to study alone, whereas, others would prefer to study in group. Which would I prefer? I would prefer to choose studying alone in my quest for academic excellence because of three reasons.
First of all, I feel more comfortable and relax. For instance I discovered recently that my performance in some of the courses I took this semester was superb and the credit goes to the opportunity I had studying alone. I feel comfortable and relax because, I easily get distracted knowing this particular weakness of mine, I said to my self to be able to come out successfully, I have to cultivate the habit of studying alone. This has proven to be really helpful as shown in my results.
Secondly, studying by one self saves time. I came to such a realisation when I took an elective course last semester; For example most of my classmates that went in group into the study room happened to fail that elective course woefully. In that, some of them spent so much time explaining the basic motive of the course; by so doing, they ended up not having time to cover up some key areas that came out in exams. But for myself that I studied alone, it was a different case because I spent less time and I was able to grasp what I was reading in a short time. I think, I attend to my desired scores because was not spending so much time on areas that are not needed in that exams.
Thirdly, I can study at my own convenient time. For instance, if I were to study in group, some members of the group may have a consensus about a particular time, if that happens, I would be on the receiving end. To avoid such an occurrence, I would prefer to have my studies all alone because, I can be flexible in the sense that if an unforeseen situation arise I would be left with another option to make it up for my studies. But, studying in group may not be similar because, there are different people who come together to agree on a particular time frame for studies; and sometimes, the time may not be conducive.
To conclude, I would prefer to study alone than to study in group because studying alone is comfortable, saves time, and is convenient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to study'.
Suggestion: to study
...ould I prefer? I would prefer to choose studying alone in my quest for academic excellen...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble and relax. For instance I discovered recently that my performance in some of ...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...overed recently that my performance in some of the courses I took this semester was superb...
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Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to study in group because studying alone is comfortable, saves time, and is conve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49302325581 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59725278167 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467441860465 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.079955959 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.684210526 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6315789474 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263744744188 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108971203044 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106767469619 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191893646703 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13003945076 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.