Some think that all entertainment TV programmes should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, some people have a tendency to think that all of the entertainment TV programmes had better focus on attaching significance to societal problems. I totally agree with this viewpoint. There are some reasons to be attributable to this thought.
On the one hand, with advanced society, almost all of the TV programme just pay attention to its entertainment instead of mixing entertainment with giving valuable lesson regarding rising social issues nowadays. TV shows should be used as vehicle to highlight the importance of actual social matters as it is possible, may affect people’s life a lot If they do not have a keen understanding of those matters. Some children, for instance, they do not aware of social risks around them like they can be kidnapped by kidnapper. Therefore, those TV programmes should combine its entertainment with providing children with some tips and ways to steer clear of being kidnapped especially keep them away from strangers.
In addition to that, If all entertainment TV shows put more of emphasis on spreading meaningful lessons to face with social issues, somehow it partially helps parents decrease their anxiety when they do not have much time to teach their children and thanks to this, it can gain its more reputation to some extent. Furthermore, society is become more and more complicated , people usually cope with challenges from many life’s aspects they could not foreseen. So disseminating social issues for viewers via TV programmes is considered as one of the utmost importance make people not only they can wind down but also enrich their knowledge, somewhat, they can avoid some unexpected situations happening around them. For example, like my mother, she told me that she was nearly seduced to buy fake honey but thanks to watch a TV programme which used to stay alert about this, so my mother did not buy.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that it is so crucial for all entertainment TV programmes to add meaningful advice to assist people to be able to heighten sense of alertness with surroundings specifically broadening their horizons with societal matters.
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| 2021-05-06 | jagrit sharma | 73 | view |
| 2021-06-16 | Jing Lu | 86 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09686609687 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89481666434 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578347578348 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8734078426 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.083333333 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315415985665 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115165790738 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580528900242 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191761757703 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494158289206 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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