Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
In this day and age, with the advent of modern society, there has been debatable between living in rural areas and in urban areas. While some people think that it will be easier for us to lead a healthy way of life in the countryside when residing in the countryside in comparison with living in cities. According to my knowledge, I firmly believe that people will enjoy health advantages in metropolises.
On the one hand, there is a wide range of compelling reasons why living in the countryside helps people to have a good lifestyle. First of all, They are able to steer clear of some environmental issues such as polluted air or water from factories or vehicles. Therefore, they rarely contract some serious diseases. For instance, according to the recent research of Viet Nam government, the rate of people who died because of bearing bad effects from the environment in the countryside was less than in cities. Furthermore, In the rural areas, because of the sparse population, people have many public places such as parks to exercise to enhance their mental and physical health. Thanks to this, they easily build up strong resistance against illnesses and have a healthy lifestyle.
On the other hand, it also offers lots of tremendous benefits when people hang their hat in mega-cities. One evident strength is that they have a host of golden opportunities to get access to cutting-edge exercise equipment more than the countryside which comes free of charge to practice, specifically in publicity places. Moreover, in cities, people are be entitled to have many healthcare systems from the authorities to have medical checks regularly. Besides, there is an array of workshops for the elderly and senior citizens to heighten their awareness in boosting their health. Case in point, in 2020, the government in Viet Nam told that the proportion of the aged death over the course of ten years reduced considerably thanks to having health protection seminars for people.
In conclusion, Although living in the countryside leaves some major benefits for people, I strongly believe that it also has numerous positive aspects of residing in cities, especially in the fast-paced world these days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...places. Moreover, in cities, people are be entitled to have many healthcare system...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 11.9565217391 5.12529762239 233% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.9861602935 2.80592935109 463% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.809782608696 0.561755894193 144% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.1 1.60771543086 193% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 265.791271489 49.4020404114 538% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 550.0 106.682146367 516% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.25 7.06120827912 343% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248774884443 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147887678333 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261719738839 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147887678333 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261719738839 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 57.9 13.0946893788 442% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -102.11 50.2224549098 -203% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 24.5 7.44779559118 329% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.9 11.3001002004 344% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 52.98 12.4159519038 427% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.33 8.58950901804 167% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 40.5 9.78957915832 414% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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