Some young adults want dependence from parents as soon as possible while the others prefer living with their family for long time. Say which of them you prefer and why? Explain it with specific examples.
Independence from parents as soon as possible or living with them is a debated issue for young adults for years. While some people want independence from their parents when they grow up, others prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Though both sides have pros and cons, I am in the opinion that living with family for long years is better for several economical and social benefits. I will explain the details of my claims in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, living with family for long years offers some specific economical advantages for young adults. If a young adult lives with his or her family he or she does not have to pay extra money for survival. To illustrate this, home hiring fee electricity water and heating bills are the extra costs of living by yourself. So, the teenager when he or she has to pay attention to his or her lessons has to dealing with the hardness of the life. They start to life too early. And they can have to loan for handling the harsh life conditions and this brings to young adults work more.
Furthermore, some social benefits will be occur if a young adult live with his or her family. In my opinion, the young adults who live with their families have stronger relationships. Because they live longer in a pretty and calm family environment and they always interact with people at home. For instance, they sometimes have to solve their family members problems, also. So, they will have good and strong relationships when they became a real adult.
Opponents of independence from parents immediately often states that this brings teenagers some psyholocigal advantages. The person who have left their family homes early are more condifident than those have lived with their family for long years. However, I disagree with these statements. In my opinion, being self-reliant is not related with left the parents it is relevant with the way of bringing up. Thus, if parents teach to their children express themselves in all conditions taking risks and dealing with hard conditions, the children will be confident. And this also be living with parents for longer years. So, I think being a confident person is related to living with parents for long times.
All in all, the advantages of living with parents outweigh the advantages of living dependent. It gives a number of economical and social benefits. Living with family reduces the costs of life and make your relationships stronger. It also provides to be self confident people to live with family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
...ages for young adults. If a young adult lives with his or her family he or she does n...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...to solve their family members problems, also. So, they will have good and strong rel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89719626168 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54079734504 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46261682243 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0670205091 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6153846154 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429959619326 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133146297991 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102594243739 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269646973112 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113320907302 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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