Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
People have different ideas about when one should commence his own life independently from his paternal family. While some people believe children should not decide hastily in this regard, I believe that the independent life should be started as soon as possible, as per following reasons.
Firstly, the sooner the child begins his own life, the sooner and the more stronger the self-confidence will be nurtured in him. self-confidence, which is an indispincibe part of any success that somebody may achieve, can only be developed when people are directly encountered to real chalenges in the life. And no one faces the vicissitudes of life before he starts his life alone. Parent cannot distill self-confidence by training their children. It is clear that independent life does not mean that children should tear any bonds with thier parents. On the contrary, they should consult them when they have any challanges to get benefitted from their parent's life-long experiences. However, they should directly tackle their own life pronblems and it is achievable only in an independent life.
Secondly, it is through the independent life that one discovers his own desires, wishes, strong and week points and ... and generally knows himself better. When children continue to live longer in their parent homes, chances are that they begin to live the life that they parents have always aspired and perhaps could not fulfill. People have tendency to guide their beloved ones to achieve vicariously what they have always wanted but could not achieve. If this happens to a child and he lives how his parents expect him to live instead of how he personally desires, he will not live a happy life, no matter how successful he will be in his life. As an instance, I have an aquaintance who has always aspired to study literature. However, borning in a family of engineers, he studied and selected a career in enginnering. Although he is successful with his career, he always complains he does not feel deeply fulfilled and happy.
Finally, commencing an independent life as soon as possible will obviate the potential of conflicts in the family. Because of the age and generation discripancy between parents and children, they have diffrent sets of values, philosophy of life and ... that would inevitably lead to frinction between them. living separately reduces the chance of discords to a large extent and helps to preserve the respect among parents and children.
In conclusion, I believe every person should begin his own life, independently from his family, a soon as it is possible for him in light of above-mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Self-confidence
...elf-confidence will be nurtured in him. self-confidence, which is an indispincibe part of any s...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...t they begin to live the life that they parents have always aspired and perhaps could n...
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Suggestion: Living
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rinction between them. living separately reduces the chance of discords to a larg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12790697674 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81419701889 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.063043649 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.227272727 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138502625928 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476864663044 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363936671671 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863587099162 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157043348537 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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