Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults want to live with their parents as long as they can.
Nowadays it important that young adults live by themselves.
In my opinion young adults should live independent from their parents as soon as possible, I completely agree with this personally I believe that its way better to know the world by yourself.
I feel this way for 2 reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all parents always tend to protect their children no matter what how old they grow. As a result that make their children unworthy and a problem to protect themselves from any difficult they face.
So it is important that the children to get independent from their parents. Eventually that is whats going to help the children from knowing the world from their own eyes and facing problem and getting their solution.
A personal experience is a compelling example of this, my friend who used to live with her parents and did not do anything on her own. She was pampered by her parents a lot, because that one day for some reason she had to go alone from the house for some work, in that situation she did not even know how to take a taxi or what are the routes, where do we get things done in bank. I helped out that day, but that struck me. Clearly, if she would have been independent from her parents she would have known these thing to do better on her own.
Secondly, if they stay independent they learn how to decisions on their on and live or shape their life however they want to.
Drawing from my own experience, my sister when was living with her parents couldn't take her own decisions to plan her expenses or investments which kept her disturbed all the time. But, after a while she got separate from her parents in her own apartment. After that she told me she could decorate her house as she want to no one will stop her and her investment or how she want to doing around. Clearly she was happy, and even if she took any wrong decision or did a mistake she was OK and learned a lesson from it.
I certainly clear to see why young adults should not stay with their parents.
I strongly believe that for their own well being young adults should live independently, which also helps them become mature for future to work on themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, i feel, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47880299252 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36690542261 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491271820449 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9983024403 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331943739254 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123029598716 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898060056958 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173899766982 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908809396925 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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