Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. 2 Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
"Independence is happiness," Susan B. Anthony, a distinguished American social reformer and women's rights activist, once said. Independence can be alluring since they have heard enough of their parents' chatter and do not want to let their parents control them anymore. However, coming of age does not mean that people are independent and can live on their own. It is imprudent to live on their own because they still need parental help.
Living independently alone does not mean that young adults are independent, and living with parents does not mean being dependent. Ones who live with their parents can live independently by doing all they are required to do or getting their first job. Also, ones who live by themselves may not be self-sufficient. They may still let their parents assist them with problems instead of solving them alone. Parents may help them tenant a house for their children to live.
T eenagers may want to be an adult more quickly, so they can do anything they want without their parents' approval. Nevertheless, they may not realize that it has many liabilities that can harm people. One disadvantage is that it can cause disconnection. There is a danger when people are immersed in their world and fail to see how you have influenced people around them. Their action can hurt both others and themselves. In addition, it can cause blindness. Being independent takes work and luck. When people are independent, young adults may forget there are others when in a new world of their own. Then loneliness may follow. Young adults may live alone, travel alone, and work independently. Therefore, living alone may not be a wise choice . While living with families means the relationship between family members can be more substantial. Young adults can learn to be independent and have a steady salary for a longer time by asking their parents to share their experiences and arrange their lives when before living on their own in the future.
However, opponents may rebut that independence can boost people's confidence., because independent People are likely to solve problems on their own more self-reliant. Plus, it becomes possible for young adults are possible to try out new things without parental interference. After a while, it may build confidence and open their mind to knowledge. Remember that young adults have parents; as a result, they may ask for their parents' help and depend on them. Furthermore, some people may not try out new things; they may hang out till midnight or participate in other activities their parents forbid them.
To sum up, self-governing has benefits but costs a lot. Those who cannot do it at once shall walk step by step to reach the summit. Being independent depends on teenagers themselves; they should always remind themselves to do things they should do. After all, self-rule may look simple. Nevertheless, it is hard for all people to really do it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, then, therefore, while, after all, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 31.0 9.8082437276 316% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02057613169 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83312347686 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485596707819 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 737.1 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4549426833 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9393939394 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31649423197 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891823347551 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079320341105 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197608903753 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075590555423 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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