The definition of independence differs from person to person. Independence might mean different things to different people like it might mean financial independence for some while it might mean freedom to take their own life decisions. Personally, I feel that young adults getting independence from their parents as soon as they are ready to tackle problems is ideal. Below are the reasons why i feel that living an independent life is essential for the personal growth of an individual.
Firstly, living independently and not relying on our parents tends to gives us experiences. These experiences can be positive or negative, but its the experiences that matter. When an individual is thrown in a problematic situation with no back up from parents, he has a lot many enriching experiences. Every individual has diverse learning from these situations and the implications of these decisions are very different and are based on the individual experiences.
Being independent teaches that only we are responsible for the decisions we take and the outcomes of those decisions. At no point can we blame parents or for that matter anyone for the happenings in our life. Its up to the individual to take decisions, learn from the mistakes and remember to never reoccur the same errors. So its essentially our understanding and thinking powers which lead to the outcomes of our lives. As examples there are multiple instances where the child feels that the parents have persuaded him/her to take up a course, university, profession, job etc when the individual is not happy. Such situations can be avoided by the independent, uninfluenced decisions of the being.
The feeling of satisfaction and pride on the positive outcomes of our decisions is immense. For example when an individual is able to move to another country for education purposes, away from his family, friends and the outcome of the effort is fruitful, where the person is able to lead a successful life thereafter, gives immense happiness to the individual.
Hence i would conclude by saying that when the person is capable enough to take the decisions then it is more effective to be independent from parents and explore the journey of life by themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, while, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12637362637 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99061144127 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508241758242 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4810409554 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.764705882 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200310929665 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639854228357 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542505832852 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102137418797 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575667506285 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.