Someone thinks that scores should be the sum total of the scores of many assignment while others think that the scores should be the results of 1 or 2 exams. Which view do you agree with and why?
Students’ grades can reflect how their learning situation recently. Therefore, some teachers prefer to sum the scores of many assignments. Other believes that the scores should be result of one or two exams. In my opinion, the scores should be sum of the scores of assignments.
First of all, if schools sum the scores of many assignments to be final scores, students will treat assignment seriously on their daily time. Some students do not treat their assignments seriously and they even copy their homework from others. If the final scores be sum of the scores of their daily assignments, they will pay attention on their tasks, which can beneficial for their study. For example, after our teachers add the scores of assignments in our final scores, most of the classmates make their effort to finish their homework.
In addition, if final scores be result of one or two exams, it is unfair for some students. That is because exams cannot always reflect true scores of students with some special situation. For example, some students may have a cold during those days, which they have crucial exams. Or some of them may too nervous so that they do less well than usual. Besides, some students cheat during the exams, like copying papers from others or to plagiarize from textbooks. Therefore, that is not fair for students who are treat exams seriously.
Admittedly, it can bring a lot work for teachers to sum much homework of every student. Most teachers are too busy during their daily time, they are responsible for bringing knowledge to students and their homework correcting. Therefore, it is impossible for teachers to sum the whole homework of every student. I suggest that the final scours should be result of some scores of homework and one exam. This way can not only relieve teachers’ pressure, but also improve students’ study.
All in all, compared with exams, summing the scores of many assignments are more beneficial for students. So I believe that students’ scores should be sum of the scores of assignments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70255171648 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438596491228 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8541171605 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311400796991 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133560941298 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132329851978 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243588271245 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130965373084 0.0645574589148 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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