Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.
Firs of all, Living at the University its a Good option if you have problems for transportation, for example, a person that lives far away from the University may spend a lot time and money just for travelling into the University everyday or may have the option to buy a car and that is also a very expensive option. Most of the people prefer living in the University because it’s more confortable.
Secondly, Living in an apartment it’s a good option for living in a more independent way, because you have to take care of your own, you have to preprare your own food, you need to have your room clean and you have less control than if you are living in the same university, because nobody is telling you what to do.
living in an apartment also have a disadvantage, that is more expensive than living in an apartment, because you have all in included, the food, the bed, its more safer,etc. However living in an apartment have also a disadvantage, that is you have less control of yourself, when you are living alone you can do whatever you want, so you have more liberty for doing things and this can be harmful. In my opinión i prefer living in the university because you have a more university life than living alone in an apartment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
Firs of all, Living at the University its a Good option if you have problems for ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...just for travelling into the University everyday or may have the option to buy a car and...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
...se nobody is telling you what to do. living in an apartment also have a disadvantag...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...all in included, the food, the bed, its more safer,etc. However living in an apartment hav...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...luded, the food, the bed, its more safer,etc. However living in an apartment have al...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and this can be harmful. In my opinión i prefer living in the university because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 226.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56194690265 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65279048566 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 145.348785872 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451327433628 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 21.2450331126 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.4006276389 49.2860985944 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.833333333 110.228320801 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6666666667 21.698381199 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06452816374 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298650380304 0.272083759551 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208189864277 0.0996497079465 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719573458484 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237505743231 0.162205337803 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765583197861 0.0443174109184 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.3589403974 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.0289183223 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 63.6247240618 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.7273730684 182% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.498013245 160% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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