Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.
universities are like the stages on which students build their lives and chosing how to live there can be a real turnaround. In my opinion, if students choose to live in the apartments in the community then they are well-off than those who choose to stay at the university dormitories. In this essay, I will address three reasons why I feel this way.
First of all, if the students choose to live in the apartments in the community they will have a congenial environment to study. In the apartments, we can expect it to be calm, quiet and convenient since this is a residential place. In contrast, many students live in the dormitories and thereby it can be sometimes very noisy and inconvenient to do concentrate on studies. Moreover, in the dormitories many students live in one room and this creates more distraction. For example, when I was in my college, in my first year, I lived in the dormitories and I was with two roommates and that was very inconvenient for me to concentrate in my studies. And as a result, I got very poor marks. later I decided to move to an apartment and it was very convenient for me and likewise I scored good. Therefore, students can be really beneficial living in the apartments in the community.
Secondly, if the students choose to live in the apartments then they have a alone time. As many people live in the same room in the dormitories, it very difficult for one to get creative and do something other than their academics. For instance, I like to paint and so later when I move to the apartment in the second year, I was able to do some paintings which I would not able to do if I stayed in the dormitories.
Lastly, since the apartments are in the community the students get to meet new people. For example, in the second year when I move to the apartment in the community I made some new friends in the apartment who were not studying in my college and we also hang around in the restaurant and went to theaters a couple of times during that time.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that an apartment in the community is better place to live for a university student than the dormitories. Because the apartments are very suitable for studying and being creative and one can make new friends outside their university peers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, likewise, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59902200489 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81186988094 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408312958435 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5796088401 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 5.45110844103 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325510087703 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126306292116 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118091186455 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203358657509 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102366442085 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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