For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.

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For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.

In today's modern world, with rapid changes toward industrialization, the absence of a perfect
A relation between people is strongly felt in almost all societies, especially in developing countries. Individuals must consider all pros and cons with issues that allow them to make a better decision. Undoubtedly, in this regard, some people advocate that it is very important to study hard in school. However, I personally disagree with this opinion and subscribe to the statement that the ability to relate well to people is more important due to a few reason, three conspicuous ones which are elaborated upon hereunder.

First of all, it is crystal clear that substantial significance of creativity makes it important and profoundly has affected the lives of people all around the world. Today’s people are involved with their busy lives and everyone worries about so many things such a work, relation, and money, to name but a few. People can enhance their creativities by a strong relationship with other people. To purpose of illustration, I clarify my point of view with a real story that happened to me in real life. Four years ago, I wanted to initiate my own business and I did not have any Idea. I met with one of my best friends whom I had a very close relationship and he suggested me plenty of ideas to import a novel product from China. I took his pieces of advice and became a very successful marketing manager that time.

Secondly, without any shadow of the doubt, communication played a magnificent role in human improvement. I mean people live in society and enjoy communication and interaction with each other. By communication, we can find so many opportunities which are suggested by our friends. In other world, friends, especially our close friends can make a sturdy connection between us and companies. For example, I remember when I was working and studying as market manager in my country I found hundreds of opportunities for a job that my close friend offered me. They introduced me to their friends and other companies. Finally, I became a market manager in a well-known company.

Third of all, apart from aforementioned explanation well relation with people helps us to make a better decision in our lives, in fact, life is replete with ups and downs. It is essential to learn how to deal with obstacles and resolve a problem in appropriate fashion. For instance, I had a friend who had met in high school. According to my abilities in an executive job, he recommended me to study management in university and that decision was one of my huge and valuable decisions during in my life.

All in all, with all into account, it can be concluded that ability to relate well people not only grows our creativity but also make our communication and relation strong. I vehemently suggest extending our connection to make our lives better and better.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'few reasons'.
Suggestion: few reasons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, i mean, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92213114754 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96810454411 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526639344262 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5919043993 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.083333333 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220559558112 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561989101515 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656677629108 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110675424947 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815097470754 0.0645574589148 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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