Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.
Today, most of the people educated in a specific majors and find relative jobs. Thus, they continue one job for rest of their life. In other side, we see other people that try a different works and take a risk and in some cases they become successful person in their work. In my view, trying new works have more weight than doing one work. In the following I will state my reasons for my choice.
The first aspect that deserves to be outlined is that performing new tasks get us a chance for finding good experiences and learn new things and new perspective. Thus, these experiences often help us in our future life. For instance, my father was a clerk, but he did some business work in his spare time. At first he lost some money but after that he learned how to conduct his contract and he got a lot of money in one of his bargains.
Second, doing a different works helps us to feel excitement for taking risk and finding a good feeling for starting new tasks. Because by doing repetitive works, we got bored and it is very exhausting for us to perform one job for many years. For instance, I taught in university for two years and I taught two lessons for 4 semesters. It is very suffering for me to repeat some topics again and again for students. Thus I changed my work and started to work as a researcher. It is a good job because I learn different and new things about my major and it is very interesting for me.
Last but not least, some time, take a risk have its own problem and in some cases, people may lose their money and their position in a society. Therefore, I think before starting new jobs , people should find enough information about it and try to manage their times and money in a better and secure way.
In nut shell, performing new tasks help us to find different experiences and new perspective about new things and it is interesting work. But considering the side effects of new work is important too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: help us find
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in my view, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41620111732 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42126502972 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486033519553 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8322543221 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2105263158 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8421052632 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17969821805 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586430917641 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564000814336 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109019451687 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465972145904 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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