t is commonly believed that in life, success is not the most important thing; it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail. Do you agree with that idea?
Some people believe that success is the most important thing in human lives; however, others think being happy and optimistic plays a more crucial role in people's lives. There has always been a controversial debate on whether being successful or happy is more beneficial for people. I think that people can benefit more from having an optimistic personality. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, failure is inevitable. Everyone has experienced at least one loss during his or her life, so it is essential to be capable of enduring our failures and continuing our lives. Being optimistic allows people to have a desire and put a lot of effort into trying again to achieve their goals. For example, my sister is very optimistic, and once she lost her job, she was still happy and tried even more to find a better job. After some months, she could finally be hired by a reputed company with a higher income than before. She could successfully find a new job because she tried hard every day and explored every company for recruiting with an optimistic perspective.
Second, undoubtedly achieving success makes people happy and satisfied. On the other hand, if someone could not be as successful as he expected, he would feel depressed and give up trying. In that case, people are anxious about their future, and they can not even concentrate on their daily activities. As a result, society will face many problems because many people live there, struggling with psychological issues and suffering from depression and anxiety. For example, some years ago, my cousin established his own business. Unfortunately, his company did not work well, and he had to repay many loans. Unestly, he got depressed and could never try again to build his own business because he believed he would fail again. If he had been optimistic, he would have been able to establish his company and provide profit not only for himself but also for his society by hiring employees and increasing the employment rate.
In conclusion, although some people believe that having success is more important, I firmly believe that people can benefit from an optimistic view. Not only do they try more than before, but also they would never suffer from depression and psychological disease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, well, at least, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94587628866 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63510856746 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0062494993 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.95 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162278724369 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489295022411 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578811082227 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114458472404 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623096403327 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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