A teacher s ability to relate well with students is more important than excellent knowledge of the subject being taught Use specific reasons and support your answers with examples

Teachers are builders of the future generation, they play a very important role in student's life in different ways. I strongly believe that a teacher's ability to resonate with a student is more important than excellent knowledge of the subject. I feel this because of two main reasons, which I will be elaborate on the following essay.

To begin with, the teacher-student relationship is very crucial for the development of a child; along with parents, teachers shape a child's behaviour. In our school, the rules were very strict but our history teacher was very kind to explain why every rule is so important. She made us follow rules with love and care which made us sincere from inside.

One reason for which I believe this idea is when a student resonates with a teacher they tend to remember to concentrate on the subject more as they find the subject interesting because of the teacher. I remember, in my school days, our maths teacher used to tell us stories and from there he used to draw the math technique. This made us more curious and inclined to the subject also helped us remember techniques.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...fferent ways. I strongly believe that a teachers ability to resonate with a student is m...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...mber to concentrate on the subject more as they find the subject interesting becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i feel, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78756476684 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68409786067 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60103626943 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 618.680645161 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2129325289 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301189101663 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131922297368 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133414488546 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213588648707 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761736148986 0.0645574589148 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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