There is no denying that teachers play a crucial role in students lives. Teachers provide students with the essential information and skills required for their future success. Although some people, if asked, would say that teachers, nowadays, are more valued than they were in the past, others think that teachers are not valued at all compared with their peers in the previous decades. The basis for my views is because governments cuts, their contribution decline due to technology advancement.
In ever increasing in public demand, governments have reduced their investments in education process as a whole. Governments are required to build hospitals, create new highways and invest a massive amount of money on army developments. As a result, governments budget is not distributed fairly. Educational institutions like schools and universities receive less and less funds from their governments. Therefore, even though, teachers still enjoying some privileges like free health insurance, excellent retirement plan and paid vacations, their average salaries are below nation salary. Since money play an important role in teachers image and dignity, they value has been brought down by low income.
In addition to their low salary, in their endeavor to minimize their expenses, universities substitute teachers with online courses and classes. Even though teachers who are teach in those online classes get a decent salary, the reduction in total teachers job positions has been greatly disvalued the teachers job position in our communities. In contrast, the high demand for teachers to fill ever increase job positions in the past created a good image in people eyes. People used to look at teachers as they are not only well knowledgeable, but as they the only source of information delivery. Introducing online classes negatively effect teachers image.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that even though their still essential part of our community, teachers image has been devaluated due to the introduction of government cuts and online college.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: There is no denying that teachers play a crucial role in students lives.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and lives
In ever increasing in public demand,
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
even though, teachers still enjoying some privileges
even though, teachers are still enjoying some privileges
they value has been brought down by low income.
the value has been brought down by low income.
teachers who are teach in those online classes get a decent salary
teachers who teach in those online classes get a decent salary
they are not only well knowledgeable, but as they the only source of information delivery.
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
even though their still essential part of our community
even though they are still essential parts of our community
Sentence: As a result, governments budget is not distributed fairly.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to governments and budget
Sentence: Even though teachers who are teach in those online classes get a decent salary, the reduction in total teachers job positions has been greatly disvalued the teachers job position in our communities.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to teachers and job
Sentence: In contrast, the high demand for teachers to fill ever increase job positions in the past created a good image in people eyes.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and eyes
Sentence: Even though teachers who are teach in those online classes get a decent salary, the reduction in total teachers job positions has been greatly disvalued the teachers job position in our communities.
Error: disvalued Suggestion: ?
Sentence: As a conclusion, we can safely say that even though their still essential part of our community, teachers image has been devaluated due to the introduction of government cuts and online college.
Error: devaluated Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 320 350
No. of Characters: 1696 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.229 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.3 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.748 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.984 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.095 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun funds is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...hools and universities receive less and less funds from their governments. Therefore...
^^^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...urses and classes. Even though teachers who are teach in those online classes get a dec...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...d classes. Even though teachers who are teach in those online classes get a decent sa...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fect teachers image. As a conclusion, we can safely say that even though their...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r still essential part of our community, teachers image has been devaluated due t...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.3081232493 0.229887763892 134% => OK
Verbs: 0.145658263305 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.078431372549 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0504201680672 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0504201680672 0.0685040099705 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140056022409 0.118717715034 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0532212885154 0.0351676179071 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85357334922 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0196078431373 0.0309702414327 63% => OK
Particles: 0.00280112044818 0.00188951952338 148% => OK
Determiners: 0.0644257703081 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00560224089636 0.0209618222197 27% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00280112044818 0.0139019557991 20% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2074.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 320.0 408.028673835 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.48125 5.86048508987 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.425 0.338922669872 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.334375 0.251872472559 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.253125 0.174417080927 145% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15 0.112833075102 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85357334922 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 66.6709352925 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0729155141 48.84282405 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.625 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 53.4375 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 2.03409090909 1.45489161554 140% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319168565029 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0963627574442 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0780634244566 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49093526924 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178774008628 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112909987551 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082592284937 0.0781384742642 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250907412742 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0273195237901 0.067059652881 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196347982102 0.210909579961 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875225982641 0.0618886996521 141% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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