Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays (not mine)
Over the past few years, the issue of whether or not in the past, teacher gain more respect in the society than nowadays has received a great deal of attention from teachers and sociologists. Although some may say that people have always valued the importance of teachers in their life, and appreciated them; I, as well as many others, believe that due to the constant development in the society and changes in the people's lifestyle, teacher do not have the position they used to have in the society.
First of all, an important reason why teachers are less appreciated these days in comparison to the past is that there are more educated people in the society nowadays. Many sociologists argue that teachers were well valued by the people in the past because being educated made teachers part of the elite portion of the society. On the other hand, due to the constant developments of the countries, there is a large amount of people who have academic education in these days’ societies. Therefore, educated people are not as important as they were in the past.
A further reason why people do not value teachers like the past is that teachers have less importance in the children's life these days. It is commonly mentioned by the experts that as parents did not pay enough attention to their children education and future life, and also most of them were illiterate, they do not have an important role in their children's life. Thus, teachers not only had to educate students, but also had to care about their students' future life and try to guide them to the right way, so they were more appreciated.
Finally, it is occasionally said that teachers are less valued in these days society because of the decline in their sense of responsibility. Most of the psychologists say that modern lifestyle has changed people in many aspects, and one of them is their loyalty. In the past people were more bounded to their responsibilities and they were always trying to do their best in their job. In contrast, people are more arrogant these days and they just think about themselves. As a result, many jobs and positions such as teachers do not have the value and importance they used to have in the past.
To sum up. considering the ideas presented in the paragraphs above, I personally believe that teachers were more appreciated and valued by the society in the past than they are nowadays chiefly due to developments in the society and changes in people's behavior and lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
Over the past few years, the issue of whether or not in the past, teacher gain more respect ...
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Line 1, column 416, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...pment in the society and changes in the peoples lifestyle, teacher do not have the posi...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
... that teachers are less valued in these days society because of the decline in their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81118881119 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65720974599 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410256410256 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2782138628 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8125 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418449292411 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162045383607 0.076458572812 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12342896098 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301086576727 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103808441325 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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