Telling the truth is a very beautiful thing .Any type of relationship should be built on honesty, in this essy I will explain why telling the truth is a crucial concideration of relationship to continue and become stronger,
First of all, if we do not telling the truth in any situation a problem. This will worse this problemes that any one can going through them for Example the father and mother are the best person that the kids follow them and try to copy their behaviars. So that the parent should be learn their children to say the truth every time and in any situation or problem. I remember when I am in seven grade I got C in histroy class ,I kept my score and did not tell my parent So no one can help me and my score become worse and wores . After the qauerter is done ,my parent got my score and knew .
Second, lying is a bad habit.When some one hided facts this will complicate every thing and weak the connection that suppose to be stronge between friends. It is horrible thing even though the propuse of lying is to correct some thing or protect our friend from bad situation. Furthermore persnon how lie at frist time, then he used to lie evey time with every one. I remember my mom told me a story when I was 6 years old about a boy when he was swiming with his friend he yalled "I will drown" ,they went to save him , he loughed and told them it just joking. Next time when he was actualy drowing ,he yalled but in this no body went to save him because they supposed it's joking like last time . So he lost his live .
In conclussion,the lying ruin the relationship and worse the situation . That is I considered that telling the truth is very important.
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Telling the truth is a very beautiful thing .Any type of relationship should be built on honesty, in this essy I will explain why telling the truth is a crucial concideration of relationship to continue and become stronger,
First of all, if we do not telling the truth in any situation a problem. This will worse this problemes that any one can going through them for Example the father and mother are the best person that the kids follow them and try to copy their behaviars. So that the parent should be learn their children to say the truth every time and in any situation or problem. I remember when I am in seven grade I got C in histroy class ,I kept my score and did not tell my parent So no one can help me and my score become worse and wores . After the qauerter is done ,my parent got my score and knew .
Second, lying is a bad habit.When some one hided facts this will complicate every thing and weak the connection that suppose to be stronge between friends. It is horrible thing even though the propuse of lying is to correct some thing or protect our friend from bad situation. Furthermore persnon how lie at frist time, then he used to lie evey time with every one. I remember my mom told me a story when I was 6 years old about a boy when he was swiming with his friend he yalled "I will drown" ,they went to save him , he loughed and told them it just joking. Next time when he was actualy drowing ,he yalled but in this no body went to save him because they supposed it's joking like last time . So he lost his live .
In conclussion,the lying ruin the relationship and worse the situation . That is I considered that telling the truth is very important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, then, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35873015873 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41273170004 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549206349206 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3150775197 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355956062928 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125945709383 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.235459031739 0.0737576698707 319% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327858633018 0.150856017488 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.3065013687 0.0645574589148 475% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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