There is usually a long queue of people waiting to buy a technological product instantly before a product gets released. Personally, I believe that it is better to wait a while after a product is released and then decide whether to buy it or not. I think this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, you can use other individuals' experiences if you wait. There is no user comment at first When a technological product like a mobile phone becomes available. However, after a few weeks, you can read other people's comments regarding the product and then make a rational decision based on these comments. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Six years ago, A friend of mine and I decided to buy laptops for university assignments. My friend bought a freshly-released notebook without researching it so much. On the other hand, I chose to buy another laptop that was available for several months. I still have the laptop because I studied lots of comments about it to finally persuade myself to buy it. My friend, however, found his notebook broken two months after he bought it. It crashed because a small amount of water had been poured into it accidentally.
Secondly, it is probable that after a while, better products become available by opponent companies. The Technological device market is highly competitive, and it is likely that a company will produce a similar product that outperforms the currently available one after a few weeks or so. For instance, last year I wanted to buy a new mobile phone. I had two options from the Samsung brand, which had been released recently. For some reason, I decided to wait for another month before choosing between them. After about two weeks, I found a new Xiaomi mobile phone that was much better than Samsung alternatives relative to its price.
In summary, I am of the opinion that it is more logical to wait for a few months before buying a freshly-released technological product. You can gather information about other users' experiences in case of those products are released for a while. Also, it is likely that after a few months, a more qualified device becomes available by rival brands.
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There are several reasons…
There are several reasons why it is better to wait until a product is released before making a purchase. One of them is that the initial fnf vs rainbow friends version of the product may have some flaws.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for instance, in summary, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91536050157 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88502776189 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557993730408 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.293003652 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5263157895 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287158769502 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083037758517 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696408569631 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218644909029 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363919464177 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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