Teachers play a cardinal role in our life. They are the sailor of our life who are not only with us on the entire journey but also help us to complete the journey. Teachers provide us a vision to accomplish our dream. Personally, I believe that parents are the best teachers because they prepare us to face challenges of life. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, parents teach us all the fundamental lesson of life. Our parents teach us how to speak, eat, behave and more important to understand the difference between good and bad. Children look up to their parents and learn several useful skills organically. Parents have great responsibilities to direct their children in the right direction. They are aware of the reality that children sway by their activities and they try to influence their children positively. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was small and observed them. I learned from them to follow discipline life such as wakeup in the early morning, eat healthy food, respect everyone's time and stand for the right things. These principles are very useful for me until now. Following these basic principles makes me feel happy and satisfied.
Secondly, parents are the best guide. Parents are not bigoted and always tell truth whether it is sweet or bitter. They love their children unconditionally and always act as a support system. Additionally, parents are the first one in the children's life who always give them honest advice, opinion, and suggestion related to everything. Considering an example, I remember, when I went to college for the first time and my father left me alone. I was very upset but now I realize, it was not an easy task for parents to leave their child alone. His main motive was to teach me how to be an independent girl in the big city. As a result, that incident made me confident and self-reliance.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that parents are the best teacher. This is because they teach their children all mandatory lesson of life which no book can publish it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84149184149 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67333754103 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517482517483 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9448841641 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6206896552 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7931034483 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.37931034483 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111306370402 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344589014459 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349491626983 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623522116998 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201541377267 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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