TPO 01 - Independent - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There has been always much debate over whether sports and social activities are as important as classes or not. Although I do not accept the term equal, I agree that these kinds of activities should receive suffice financial support because they will result in healthy individuals, effective working hours, and increased life expectancy and life quality.
To start with, these activities keep students in healthy condition. Health is always an important concern and challenge to society and government. There are two approaches to have a healthy society. The first one is to keep society in healthy condition, and the second one is to cure unhealthy individuals. There is no doubt that the second approach is expensive, and it can become uncontrollable. As the first approach is cheaper and more efficient, society should practice it, and universities and colleges are the best places to start.
Secondly, students with healthy body and mind are able to use their abilities more effectively. I can compare my first year and my second year at university to demonstrate this reason. I took a swimming course in my first year; I was energized and happy with my other courses during that year, but I feel sleepy and bored during next year.
Finally, these activities will increase life expectancy. As students connect together socially, they will be happier with their life. This happiness increases life expectancy. People with higher life expectancy will be more positive and more available to their society, and this will increase life quality.
In conclusion, I stated that equal term is not a suitable word, but these sports and social activities are important, so they should receive effective financial support. Healthy individuals, effective working hours, and increased life expectancy and life quality were the mentioned reasons.
- TPO 01 - Independent - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and ex 3
- TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task 81
- TPO 01 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to supp 3
- TPO 41 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30716723549 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7682442164 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529010238908 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.730385993 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4705882353 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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