Universities and Colleges are the two important platforms where students can build themselves for the sake of future purposes may be for the career or for the betterment of the humanities. To pursue a very good career there is no alternative to study. Along with the study, it is also needed to take part in sports and social activities to make the students fit and more sociable. I totally agree with the following statement that universities and colleges must spend the same amount of financial support as like spending for classes and libraries because of widespread importance of sports and social activities.
Sports is a very good medium to make a student physically fit and to rejuvenate the eagerness of doing study or works. It is also a great medium of learning from the different playmates. Research shows that if a student spends sometime every day for sports his physical fitness and working sprit is much higher than those who only spend their time in studying. For example- if a student goes every day the playground of college or university he will meet new people and conspicuously he will have more friends along with having good health. On the other hand, those students who spoil their time playing video games or watching movies as an alternative of sports may have much more disappointment and much more possibilities being addicted to the drug and other harmful activities. As sports plays a great role building a students character, make them physically fit and a means of great learning it is a must field to receive equal financial support as like as classes and libraries.
Social activities also important for a student as like as classes and libraries. Whatever we learn through our textbooks or in class we have to implement our learning for the betterment of our society. Social activities like raising funds for the helpless, teaching the uneducated, providing treatment to poor people are some social works. This works teach a student how to deal with the society and its people. For example- if a very good student doesn't know how to deal with the people, how to communicate with people then there is nothing important to read. A person's learnings become fruitful when he/she can apply those in the society. To do that social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and colleges and universities need to raise fund equally for the social activities as like as the classes and the libraries.
The importance of sports and social activities in a student's life is immeasurable cause it along with building a student's career helps his to be confident enough to implement their class learning in the society. So it is very much plausible to spend the equal amount of financial help for sports and social activities as like as classes and libraries to make the student more confident, resilient and self-reliant.
Finally, it can be said that to build a student more active and more efficient, the importance of raising financial support for sports and social activity is inevitable.
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 73
- TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiri 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 823, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...As sports plays a great role building a students character, make them physically fit and...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ce of sports and social activities in a students life is immeasurable cause it along wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, so, then, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 13.8261648746 217% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2537.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96477495108 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75299832438 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41095890411 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.0 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1347485966 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.85 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.55 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228772817179 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865316663303 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850895730054 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160855982 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415187543685 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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