Without any shadow of doubt, sports and social activities play a substantial role in the student's life. In the modern era, only study knowledge is inadequate for the student's in competitive world. student should have to participate in all the activities such as sports, social activity which provide an immense knowledge of a particular field. According to my point of view universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. there are significant points for substantiate that sports and social activities are important for student's future.
In begin with, in social activities people interact with each other. whenever people are interact with each other there communication skills also intensify. they have an opportunity to understand people that how they interact with each other?, how they think?. by these social interaction people also can overcome their fear. for instance, my college celebrate every year annual day program-me in which they organize many activities such as dancing, singing, painting, etc. many student participate in the activities they show there talent in front of the audience and they have chance to overcome their fear by this opportunity. in these program many people interact with each other. the other instance, in marketing place people have to interact with each other, for earning huge amount of money.
Moreover sports activity is also important. after continuous study student tiring and sports activity is one of the important activity to overcome the stress.sports activity is significant for the physical and mental health. furthermore, in sports activity student learn about their role, and how to treat people in the group this ability help the student for the future life.
in brief, sports and social activities are provide significant role for the future life. they improve students communication skills, overcome fear of stage and provide huge experience.Students should have given both side attention social and study because of both had equal importance in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46951219512 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78854603596 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6140884128 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196884768626 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827288200089 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964181684207 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137704244975 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751014860019 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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