University is the place to gain education, nonetheless, people need to look after one's health.On the one hand, classes and libraries are one of the most essential thing to study. On the other hand health is more important to live.So I strongly agree to the statement that social activities should receive as same as financial aid like libraries and classes.
As far as I am concerned, sports reduce the possibility to suffer from a disease which is based on lack of movement. In this day and age, students tend to sit on a table in long time, in order to good grade or get a scholarship to study. Nevertheless, sit down without any breaks and any moves is a bad habitat. Then it will influence your health in a bad path, whereas sports can relieve a stress and plays an important role for protecting student's welfare. Therefore, I for one, school administration has to spend much more money on social activities.
Another reason why I feel that way is libraries and classes don't need to renewed constantly.It can stand for many years with occasional purchases such as books, desks and computers. As opposed to, sports requires more funding because of its consumption.For instance, there are hundreds of sports which are played in a various ways in the world. Therefore, sport facilities need to use different type of equipment, safety gear and lockers. Also there comes additional costs of coaches, travel in order to participate international competition.
Taking everything into consideration, people must concern about their health while studying. Libraries and classes are important in its own way. By the same taken, health is essential and we need to protect them using physical activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for instance, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00706713781 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91089306837 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632508833922 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6043628901 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145479905697 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463852137865 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614626955412 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859651227061 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553326773132 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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