Sports and other social activities are essential part of our life specially young people who are more energetic and they can actively participate in social and sports events. Some believes that universities should support sports and social activities just as libraries. I definitely agree with the statement the reasons for my propensity are as follows.
The very first reason the sports and social activities develop students capabilities of learning. when students play sports their mind and physical health become more strengthen, also social activities boost confidence in students for instance, when students participates in social issues then he faced man people and perform in front of many audience this improves his confidence as well as learning abilities. He learn how to communicate in public, this also helpful in his career when he graduate and look for job in market and in interviews. Most of the jobs nowadays required good communication skills, so financial support in universities for sports and social purpose helps students maintain good mental and physical health along with communication skills.
Moreover. sports and social events provides opportunity to explore new talent among the students. When during sports and social events many students participates we can select some good players who can represent our college or university nationally and internationally, also we can find good organizer which can represent in different events in college ceremonies. for instance many students have no opportunity to show their hidden skills. When universities give them chance providing enough funds for social and sports events, It is beneficial for both institutes and students, they brings the fame when they perform well in other places outside the universities. Funding for sports and social activities offers more chances to students to show their capabilities.
In conclusion, although students go to universities for studies but sports and social life is also part of students life. Which explore the learning abilities of students as well as brings new talent in front of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49386503067 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8591145681 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503067484663 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.606997538 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.928571429 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157795256994 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760572810954 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665731514398 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120640487052 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778504816051 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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